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January 25
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Stagnate
   mind
      languish
         among
            rancid
               cesspool.
Frosty
   psyche
      locked
         within
            motionless
                tundra.
              
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What does a writer's block feel like?
This is a new style for me.
1. Does the two line flow and is descriptive.
2. What is your overall impression.
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Mood: Love ~Genesys9999 Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love it! It reminds me the Robert Creeley's way in his poems and his renown minimalism and the hermetic Italian poems. More, please!
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Mood: Love ~Genesys9999 Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love it! It reminds me the Robert Creeley's way in his poems and his renown minimalism and the hermetic Italian poems. More, please!
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I like it, and I like the way you've staggered the words on the paper.
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^VSConcepts Jan 25, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
LOL. It's Irony at its finest.
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*ChristalKitto Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I thought one way to break it was to write about it.
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